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Post by deathhawk235 on Nov 1, 2007 16:24:32 GMT -5
Race: The Conjure
Description: Their 6 feet tall have pale skin, yellow eyes, are bald, and have thin blank features. They talk in a monotone voice and always have a prefect posture and hygiene. They have this weird hive mind type mind set
Religion: They believe in the great brain thought of this world and that’s when it came into existence. The great brain is there to lead the universe into a new area of evolution. But it can only be achieved with their help. They go around “fixing” species by being “the catalysts for the new dawn”.
Government: Mind controlled/ Anarchism
The all just are kind of on their own agendas and working on their projects but for the common good. In all their history there has never been a fight or conflict between any Congers.
Planet: X-235- 67w23
A mass of different climates and terrains all on one planet, with a couple of big cites on it. All the buildings are either labs or warehouses.
Military:
A horde of awful genetic freaks that all just go and rip apart the enemy.
I might add more. But it is just a game.
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Kinghy
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Post by Kinghy on Nov 1, 2007 21:50:52 GMT -5
CONJAAAH!
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Post by hibernatingeek on Nov 1, 2007 22:49:34 GMT -5
boo
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Post by El Maxo on Nov 1, 2007 22:58:49 GMT -5
Wow... if you hadn't talked about them in real life, I would think the Conjure were a silly race... wait...
So every person looks almost exactly the same? How odd...[/quote]
The people do, or the monsters, or both? Do they just think the same or are they under the control of some powerful entity?
What? Is this the thing that controls their minds, if they are being controlled at all?
Honestly? That's got to suck...
Ooh, real scary.
Blasphemy! Just a game? What are you, some kind of crazy guy? We all know that this is much more than that!
If you continue this "just a game" heresy, the Friendly Wars Elders will have to take immediate action against you and your precious Conjure. You have been warned.
P.S. "Constructive" criticism is for squares.
P.P.S. Don't make me mention your grammar as well!
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Kinghy
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Post by Kinghy on Nov 2, 2007 14:27:34 GMT -5
CONJAAAH!
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Post by hibernatingeek on Nov 2, 2007 16:05:24 GMT -5
dude this is not a joke, you are the 10000000 visitor!!!!!!!!!!!
cthulhu!
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Post by deathhawk235 on Nov 4, 2007 16:23:26 GMT -5
mehhh...
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Post by El Maxo on Nov 5, 2007 1:34:15 GMT -5
That's all you have to say for yourself for creating such an awful, terrible race? "Mehhh..."!??!?! You can't even say "I'm sorry for making a mockery out of Friendly Wars", or "I didn't mean to make a fool out of you and everybody else by making something so terrible and disgraceful that it makes all the people involved look like incompetent losers"? You should be ashamed. EDIT: This is a joke. Julian, please don't take this too harshly. |
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EXPLOSIONS, MORE EXPLOSIONS!!!
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Post by bverd759 on Nov 5, 2007 1:39:47 GMT -5
What the fuck. (Yes i know i spelled it out, its so terrible that i feel it needed a spell out and an explanation) So, seriously, what the fuck is up with this? Why on earth would you make something so plain and boring? Sigh, friendly wars is slowly being poisoned...
Edit: Learn to use the edit button
Another Edit: How can a government be hive mind and anarchism?
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Post by hibernatingeek on Nov 5, 2007 1:52:08 GMT -5
its just wrong... *sigh*
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Post by El Maxo on Nov 5, 2007 2:09:56 GMT -5
"Plain and boring"? Hah! So far, the Conjure have been the most interesting thing to happen to this generation of Friendly Wars so far. Granted, they don't help generate atmosphere, but I like them anyway.
They just have that certain charm to them...
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Kinghy
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Post by Kinghy on Nov 5, 2007 13:33:05 GMT -5
What the fuck. (Yes i know i spelled it out, its so terrible that i feel it needed a spell out and an explanation) So, seriously, what the fuck is up with this? Why on earth would you make something so plain and boring? Sigh, friendly wars is slowly being poisoned... Edit: Learn to use the edit button Another Edit: How can a government be hive mind and anarchism? We were being facetious. You seem to have missed that. |
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bverd759
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EXPLOSIONS, MORE EXPLOSIONS!!!
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Post by bverd759 on Nov 8, 2007 1:48:35 GMT -5
well let me restate i guess, the race idea isn't bad, its just underdeveloped/very incomplete.
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Post by El Maxo on Nov 8, 2007 3:10:47 GMT -5
Yeah, well, it's Julian, so this may be the best of the Conjure we're gonna' get.
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